Comments for Derivative

Comment on That’s What She Said by Cendri

Cendri — Mon, 31 Aug 2009 01:35:35 +0000

<3, all the way.

blindmieko — Sun, 09 Nov 2008 02:28:11 +0000

I love this story. I hope you update soon and post the next chapter!

krayxlidlon — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 02:11:18 +0000

Yes. This. This is how Cid is.

Cendri — Mon, 13 Oct 2008 02:43:47 +0000

“Really? Huh.” She took a closer look. “Who’s the cute girl kissing him?”

I sighed. “That’s me, Yuffie.”

“You were a girl?” I couldn’t tell if she was kidding. I hoped she was kidding.

So that part basically KILLED me. I was giggling the whole way through. And the last line. And it’s basically awesome.

krayxlidlon — Mon, 13 Oct 2008 02:43:38 +0000

“Just like Veld’s old-fashioned patter and disapproving coughs, it was as much a facade as it was any real expression of how I felt.”

I freeking love your Vin voice. I love it so so much.

kuroban — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 19:42:24 +0000

This is made of absolute victory.

kuroban — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 19:37:39 +0000

I agree with Cendri. That line is lovely, as is the final sentence. <3

krayxlidlon — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 05:24:03 +0000

…Yes. Just YES

Zaratha — Sun, 14 Sep 2008 23:59:16 +0000

I like. It’s so like the two of them. <3

Cendri — Sun, 14 Sep 2008 17:20:10 +0000

“You looked at a woman?”

The tone there is hilarious.